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This is my first colored drawing, that that i actualy finished, so please don't just say its cool and such, but instead please point out the things you don't like and give me some tips cause i realy want to get better :D thanks

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:iconredchevelle:
The coloring and shading are nice but, as it's been said, some sharper edges, contrast would help a little. Classic comics are drawn in pretty much color and ink, don't be afriad to up the contrasts and lines a little on a copy.

Experimentation is the fun part of art, after all :)

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This is the world we live in, and these are the hands we're given,
use them and let's start trying, to make it a place worth living in
:iconmort-janu:
Nice sense of volume. But you definitely need to have sharper edges. It looks almost blurry right now, and human eyes like contrast. Make some edges sharper and don't be afraid to insert a line every now and then =) Volume wise its way better than what I can pull off, did you have a reference?

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no :D well just for the costume i guess :D
:iconr3d5un:
:D yea i guess he doesn't look intense as he should
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Pro's: He looks very vivid and in motion.

Con's: He looks like a Power Ranger.

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'Emotional disorder' is just a fancy term for personality. In the governments opinion, too many people are afflicted.
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i love it ! it`s nice ! yeah ! [link]

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